Really good first draft, the storyline is potrayed well and is clear to the viewers. Need to add soundtrack to give it a final trailer feel and also need to re-shoot some scenes as there are shaky camera movements.
The storyline is good and easy to follow. You have used a wide variaty of shots keeping it interesting. You need to re-shoot scene 1 as the camera movement is not steady and the framing is wrong. Finally a sound track would make the trailer more interesting
When some of the shots are re-filmed it will look alot more professional as some of the shots are shakey and have alot of background noise. Some of the shots could be edited and cut down abit more so that the shots flow quickly. When background music is added it will become alot better instantly. The storyline makes me want to watch the show and the text at the end of the trailer works really well x
This is really good katie! the order of the trailer is easy to follow, try looking up the e4 made in chelsea music, theres loads of soundtracks to choose from! - well done
Good Story line to follow, you have also used a good selection of shots. Shots are steady in most scenes but there are some unsteady shots which needs to be altered and a soundtrack should be added
Really good first draft, the storyline is potrayed well and is clear to the viewers. Need to add soundtrack to give it a final trailer feel and also need to re-shoot some scenes as there are shaky camera movements.
ReplyDeleteThe storyline is good and easy to follow. You have used a wide variaty of shots keeping it interesting. You need to re-shoot scene 1 as the camera movement is not steady and the framing is wrong. Finally a sound track would make the trailer more interesting
ReplyDeleteWhen some of the shots are re-filmed it will look alot more professional as some of the shots are shakey and have alot of background noise. Some of the shots could be edited and cut down abit more so that the shots flow quickly. When background music is added it will become alot better instantly. The storyline makes me want to watch the show and the text at the end of the trailer works really well x
ReplyDeleteThis is really good katie! the order of the trailer is easy to follow, try looking up the e4 made in chelsea music, theres loads of soundtracks to choose from! - well done
ReplyDeleteGood Story line to follow, you have also used a good selection of shots. Shots are steady in most scenes but there are some unsteady shots which needs to be altered and a soundtrack should be added
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